Saturday, August 13, 2005

On Growing Old Comments

Rating: 5.0

only the bayan tree
by the temple seems
to be growing stronger
tougher these forty years
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john tiong chunghoo
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Herbert Nehrlich1 13 August 2005

I do love this poem. Don't really completely know why.If you could fix the two or three errors it would be great. H

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Peter A. Crowther 13 August 2005

This is a very fine poem that shows forth the character of the bayan tree. Congratulations

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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