Monday, May 30, 2016

On Golden Wings Comments

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Hope, does not last long
in a heart that does not sing
one filled with that fear
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Michael Walkerjohn
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Nosheen Irfan 30 May 2016

That's a well-conceived poem. You have described hope in beautiful imagery.

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Aloha Nosheen... IAM hearing most clearly, so much more than this world's orchestra within your commnets... and I most profoundly thank you... for haveing a looking on this here prose that I have posted... This particular arrangement of words is most potent because there are two worths within... my geenerous fellow bard Ms. Dodd posted a work that was especially calling out to me... and luckly me, I answered at that calling... I call this effort a bounce... where I take apart completely the words and scramble those eggs with a few of my owned words and worth; and all of a sudden... Senryu! Some Cooking word smythe I become... Instantly... at times this is really kool... and my opposite is very pleased and happy... then there are those instances... in which I ged Abdul'ed! and the movement is further south moving rapidly! My fellow bard Ms. Dodd has suggested something about me heading that southern direction and now... hopefully this little snag will become unsnagged and I can keep this post aboard... If not... no worries... I now have a file... and can fly it wherever and to whom ever I please... kinda sorta maybe... like a desert Bedouin... yea, if you are in the desert... and come across anything that is of value.... like a message in a bottle, or a bottle that may have a Genie within... and no other soul or body is around close to claim it... you do! We may see this in action... whatever! (I simply love this term!) Please do enjoy this post... as I enjoy so many of the lines you pen... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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