On Going Comments

Great poem in short, but strong in meaning, excellent piece

i would use ongoing, but i've noticed several PH poets breaking some of my words into two words, e.g. somewhere i would write as one word, while others.....(in U.K. and former 'Commonwealth nations [i feel]) ..... might use some where. a playful poem. to MyPoemList. it also has a nice 'sound' to it. bri ;)

Through perception we are feeling glad and sad filling our minds. An amazing perceptional poem is shared.10

We are on going Observing, feeling Touching, guessing Glad and sad filling our mind Both we are laughing And crying. An excellent piece of poetry full of practical knowledge, wisdom and experiences

On Going activities are filling our brain and mind with various feelings, you have written a great poem dear poetess. I praise this one, thank you for sharing the poem with us, ++++++++++++ 10