Saturday, February 25, 2006

On God's Mountain Comments

Rating: 4.4

To be on your mountain top
with an elevated view,
could my chances increase
for getting a glimpse of you?
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Joseph James Breunig 3rd
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Chinedu Dike 30 October 2019

Well articulated and nicely penned with spiritual insight. A fine and lofty verse.

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Ernestine Northover 06 September 2006

May your wish come true. Lovely poem of a longing to see our Lord. Nicely written. love Ernestine XXX

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Christian Eliab Ratnam 21 July 2006

WOW! ! ! This poem simply blew me away. It's awesome the way combine personal feeling with so wonderful truth. I loved this one! ! ! Beautiful, just beautiful.

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Joe...A fine piece of verse, relating to Faith and the human element of ocassional Doubt...Fact is, I suppose, we'd all like a glimpse at HIS eyes, and smile of reassurance...But then thats what Faith is all about, as so I was taught back at Holy Family Grammar....Great piece...Job well done, Joe'''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Joseph James Breunig 3rd

Joseph James Breunig 3rd

Bangor, Maine (USA)
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