Sunday, March 23, 2008

On Gentle Breeze My Love Shall Sail Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can but reach you in my dreams
The only way to love ir seems
But as I wake to find you gone
Each time I feel I can't go on,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ann Beard 26 March 2008

Lovely as usual Andrew you write sad perfectly. Ann

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Alison Cassidy 24 March 2008

The rhyming couplets serve to intensify the sense of nostalgia in this bitter-sweet poem about loss and longing. Your images are intensely romantic and your poem flows with great ease. So sad. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Thad Wilk 24 March 2008

Love this poem Andy! Soft and flowing, ever glowing! A really great read! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Ernestine Northover 23 March 2008

This is so lovely to read Andrew, so poignant and flowing with hopeless love. A joy to find. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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