Friday, September 16, 2016

On Gallows Comments

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We have all the vultures and hounds around
Thirsty eyes are in search of some human
Coffins are taken away from bodies on ground
But where ever we go we see but just none
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Tammy Hendrix 16 September 2016

My God this is hellish and morbid. It brings about visuals of war and the terrible things we ask of our men and women who serve; the horrifying things they go through, and the suffering of the innocents that get caught in the middle of it all. Your poem is vivid and uncompromising. Good poetry does that, it grabs and does not let go. This is a hard read but a good one. Thank you for sharing.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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