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On Footpath Comments

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On footpath
walking with my shadow
I don't remember you
I don't remember your remembrance
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Naseem Khan
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Joy Dubé 09 June 2022

I love your poem, it is very visceral and very well written.

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Joy Dubé 09 June 2022

Hi, you just need to add "awakened" maybe? Or just "awake"? Instead of "are awaken". Also having "to" polish, maybe?

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Naseem Khan 22 June 2022

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