On Fancy's Wings Comments

No laws of gravity should pull me down Let me rest awhile in that magic kingdom Not for ever, but for a little while To look down from that cosmic arena And pity upon the poor earthlings Who never realize how insignificant they are.....outstanding conceptualization. A superb poem is so nicely delineated.10

Thank you for sharing Valsaji, Superb imagination, well set out with a highly remarkable motivating conclusion.

Thank you Valsaji for sharing, There I would build a palace Amid the clouds to dream in peace With none to disturbed of Exert.j I feel it's a dream in heaven.

Thank you Valsaji, While busy in the day to day bustle of life, we rarely get time to float about in the cloud to be relaxed and in Bliss. Thank you for sharing

With all such ignorance shed With new knowledge garnered Petty strife set aside, in greater humility Finally to descend down a better being! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -If only, if only, we humans would strive for humility- - just think of all the pollution that would cure, and all the poverty that would be chased away, and the crime rates would drop like a rock. We should all swallow a good-sized dollop of humility every day for our health, for our society's health, and for our planet's health. A well-written important write, Valsa. 10++++++++++++++++++

To rise and still higher, Nice to share mam, Thank you.

in our earthly characters most of us act as little little gods and we have if it is right some jealousy with the Real. fantasy is a routine but your poetic lines are beautiful. nice to read

Just after having read the poem I was thinking of the point of worldview you are attempting to paint in this as human's duty.I recognized in this philosophy's point of view to see things in our world through a universal supervision or sub specie eternitatis.Before commenting the poem I read your answer to Daniel's comment and was so pleased to see that you had in mind the world of ‘A frog in the well’, which proves that indeed you wanted to project the alternative world view of our humanity, the universal supervision. Always enjoying your perceptions, dear Valsa.

To float amid twinkling stars! ! Thanks for sharing.

I love this one. I used to dream of going up there of kingdoms in the clouds. Your poem reminded me of that. Beautiful imagery Valsa....this is the peace that poetry provides....a secret place to dream...where no one can reach you...unless you want them to. A wonderful journey.

Wish you all the best again in your newfound tranquility far far away and above from all mortal worries. Lovely write. Great dream substance. Silvery imagery. (10)

A wonderful metaphor of the need for renewal. I lobe the snake skin image. When ours sloughed their skins they had an incredible sparkle like a new being, so your first image picked me up and swept me on into your magical journey. As you say you are taking a little rest (hopefully on Wings) it'll give me a chance to catch up a little on one of my very favourite poets. This one too is going into my favourites' list, Valsa.

That's a wonderful journey of renewal n rejuvenation. We all need this break from the worldly life and go on a journey of self-discovery and spiritual cleansing. Again a deft use of language from your master pen. A wonderful flight of imagination to unknown and a coming back in renewed spirit. A huge 10.

I just love this one, Valsa. Just get out there for a time and see all in perspective. What a great dream, perhaps one our soul can achieve after we shed our body temple. When I read your comments below on the frog-in-the-well the whole poem gets still more meaning and overflows even more with wisdom. A true joy to read!

If one could suspend one's self in mid-air, survey the domain below and aspire to even greater heights! Such a perfect dream. I think this is everyone's goal. Some people seek the goal metaphorically; others have more earthly, somewhat literal aspirations. A great poem, Valsa. A 10.

Let me rest awhile in that magic kingdom Not for ever, but for a little while Rightly said. It is not easy to stay in such a place for long. we will then think of this sweet life on earth.with friends around.

I have spent the past hour reading through these poems of the last 24 hours, and as I came to this page I wondered, Does Valsa have a poem here today? and at that moment I saw your poem before me. And what a wonderful poem it is. It can be enjoyed just for its imagery evoking the beauty of our living planet. It can be enjoyed for its convincing fantasy of spiritual flight to be as place beyond the travails of earthly life. But your poems always have a moral dimension which is their highest enjoyment. In this one a good man is rewarded with a voyage to paradise. But he sees it as a kind of restoration of his depleted energy; he has no intention of staying in bliss when so many suffer on earth due to injustice or their own evil ways. So he will give up paradise for the sake of service. What a redemptive journey on fancy's wings your poem records!

Creative minds have no boundaries. Imagination is one great thing that the mind can do. When a poet has such a mind, even a 'mindless' can be made imaginative. Thanks very much for making us more imaginative. Great stuff indeed. Omission, regretted.

I think at such a lovely place you may need a good neighbor. May I? A lovely poem I really liked it very much.

With all such ignorance shed With new knowledge garnered Petty strife set aside, in greater humility Finally to descend down a better being! I too, feel the same Valsa! Wonderful array of thoughts.