On Edge Of Line Comments

I agree. Most of the thinking, feeling people feel that they are on the edge.Undecided, confused and disoriented in many moments of life. Well penned.

it seems that this line is in a state of limbo, alive yet dead and searching which way should he go. intresting write

'Some are teary tales to share, But all its tales are truly fare.' Some of life's experiences are sad and difficult to share. At times we cry, Life is hard, but fair. A lovely poem.

' I slept on the edge in light ' that is a rally great line - BRAVO

I have homes but I have no home-seems to be a paradox, yet the poem speaks well through out.

Good write well express

Thanks for the invite. It's a nice poem with rhythm

wow, that is really good! ! ! ! ! you are amazing! ! ! ! ! ! (10)

On this edge I hear the songs And the cries in the breeze wonderful meditative confessional poem 10/10

I agree with Yoonoos. The stanza formation is symmetrical and the images are vivid.

the first verse is kinda tricky which makes the whole more interesting... nice write!

Thats a good write.very nice.

yah! like pleasure of time....a timeless expression of life...a dream a God bless 10 +