Saturday, September 6, 2008

On Crystal Wings Comments

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I paint my dreams in summer light
Set to music my earthly hymn
And to my ears the stars will sing
As angels on crystal wings
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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Raynette Eitel 17 May 2009

Lorraine, have you ever considered using 'you' instead ot 'thee.' The poem would still be a lovely hymn but with a contemporary feel. Just a thought. Your images are wonderful but I am jarred by the archaic language. Raynette

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Chitra - 19 September 2008

resonant imagery, and definitely deep in thought

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Taher Al-Shemaly 10 September 2008

Peaceful poem. Makes you urge to dream.

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Shimon Weinroth 06 September 2008

crystal wings, lovely metaphore, poignant and very well crafted poem

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Kris Smith 06 September 2008

Lovely write soft to the eye and easy to the heart 10 Chris

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