Sunday, October 4, 2015

On Cross Roads Comments

Rating: 5.0

My mind says - Leave it and proceed!
My heart says - Stay and believe,
Is it a tug of war between mind and heart?
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rousouses Mariha 09 April 2025

This poem goes to explain that our path crosses a stage where we have to make choices with regrets in future with no ifs and buts. Life will progress gradually.

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Gordon Walter 17 April 2024

Too good a poem to re-read

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Poetic Sky 14 April 2024

Lovely lovey poem.

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Mystic Poet 06 April 2024

Very well written poem. I liked the topic and flow.

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Deepak S S 04 April 2024

Always good to read this poem.

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Sheeya Hacks 02 April 2024

Some poems are worth reading again and again and this is one such poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 March 2024

Very Wise verse thanks for sharing this bravo-worthy poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 March 2024

Ratio and emotion are constantly at Crossroads, the highway of our minds! Truly fascinating. This will be my next short poem, inspired by you, Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir! 5*****

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M. Asim Nehal 27 April 2024

Thx Much Madam Sylvia.

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Rob Lamberton 31 January 2024

I always like the plurality of life! *****

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Bill Cantrell 10 November 2023

Brilliant and intellectually coupled with elegance, very well penned sir

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Denis Mair 06 November 2023

Being tugged this way and that at the crossroads----this is the 'CROSS' on which all human beings must suffer, no matter what faith they believe in,

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Brian De-Costa 18 July 2023

Awesome poetry. The best of yours.

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Mystic Poet 12 July 2023

Choice is difficult to make. Poem is Good.

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Koffi Sossou 10 July 2023

It is a tough war and never will it end. The Id, Ego, and the Superego war.

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M. Asim Nehal 27 April 2024

Thanks Much Koffi.

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Sabahat Batool 29 May 2023

Beautiful, mesmerizing logic trying to defeat dreams and soul playing games with body. A wonderful description of tormented soul it's anguish and pain which it feels on crossroads

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M. Asim Nehal 29 May 2023

Thank u so much for your review and comment.

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Indira Renganathan 22 August 2022

So beautifully said about the dilemma and war between mind and heart....full score

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M. Asim Nehal 19 May 2023

Thanks much Indira Ji...

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Bharati Nayak 29 June 2022

A great poem Asim ji. While mind is ruled by reason, heart is ruled by emotion.Mind says one thing, heart says the other. Five stars for this beautiful poem.

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Sheeya Hacks 13 April 2024

Yes this poem deserves all applause and appreciation.

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Richard Wlodarski 15 May 2022

Meditating on the tug of war.

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Craig Moses Uche 31 December 2021

'Logic trying hard to defeat dream', what a line. This poem can be equated any cross road of decision making be it love or vision. Please do consider reading a similar poem i wrote, 'The Other Side'.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 02 March 2022

Please send the link...

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S H 03 August 2021

We all know yet we conveniently ignore this, nice thought provoking poem.

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