My mind says - Leave it and proceed!
My heart says - Stay and believe,
Is it a tug of war between mind and heart?
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Some poems are worth reading again and again and this is one such poem.
Ratio and emotion are constantly at Crossroads, the highway of our minds! Truly fascinating. This will be my next short poem, inspired by you, Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir! 5*****
Brilliant and intellectually coupled with elegance, very well penned sir
Being tugged this way and that at the crossroads----this is the 'CROSS' on which all human beings must suffer, no matter what faith they believe in,
It is a tough war and never will it end. The Id, Ego, and the Superego war.
Beautiful, mesmerizing logic trying to defeat dreams and soul playing games with body. A wonderful description of tormented soul it's anguish and pain which it feels on crossroads
So beautifully said about the dilemma and war between mind and heart....full score
A great poem Asim ji. While mind is ruled by reason, heart is ruled by emotion.Mind says one thing, heart says the other. Five stars for this beautiful poem.
'Logic trying hard to defeat dream', what a line. This poem can be equated any cross road of decision making be it love or vision. Please do consider reading a similar poem i wrote, 'The Other Side'.
We all know yet we conveniently ignore this, nice thought provoking poem.
This poem goes to explain that our path crosses a stage where we have to make choices with regrets in future with no ifs and buts. Life will progress gradually.