Tuesday, September 3, 2019

On Course To Kiss The Curse Comments

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A failed State with no sense of remorse,
Flaunting nukes— a far too-flogged tired horse,
How far can go a bomb?
No farther than one's tomb,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Bri Edwards 04 September 2019

p.s. i liked/was attracted to...the title. and NOW i've read the 'topics' and see " humour" as well as " war" . i guess i may spy a tiny humor/humour in it....if i get out my poetic magnifying glass. :)

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 September 2019

Thank you Bri, it is basically humour and as is my limerick style it always tries to tell something. As to humour and war both sharing a place together does of course seem a bit in-congruent, I agree with you. But then PH has not listed humour as a subject, though it has laughter, and funny (and I do find it funny) .

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Bri Edwards 04 September 2019

Ouch, ouch, OUCH! ! ! ! Our arm(s) hurts, due to armaments, me thinks! ! ! speaking of China, i suppose. i'm no world-watcher. and i'm glad i'm not one of the ones 'running' this OR any other country! ! ! Heck, lots of people are glad! ! bri :)

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 September 2019

I see what you mean. You referred to Chins, but but if you read carefully I am primarily talking about another country. It is not hard to guess. Thank you for taking interest and for incisive comments. I am always for frank comments. There is too much of goody-goody feedback, which would lower the standards of the poems. Have you seen any rating less than 10?

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