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(cont.) 3 - " splitting up the meat" ? ? beef, pork, or python? " For it is not ecstasy that bonded us merry? " ...i wonder if you want " ..it is.." or " ..is it..." ? ? you make it sound as though the survivors of a recent war, local citizens, found relief amongst ruin. could it be. you were half asleep? maybe. or half awake? even with glossary (thanks, btw) it was not perfectly clear, as you suspected. bri :)

(cont.) 2 - " labefaction" (you used this in another poem; i didn't know its meaning there either) .." a weakening or impairment especially of moral principles or civil order: downfall, overthrow (cont.)

1 - " gale" ..storm? " soma" ...intoxicating juice from a plant of disputed identity that was used in ancient India as an offering to the gods and as a drink of immortality.. OR " bodies" ? ? ? " survival of serenity" i like the alliteration " adorned" ? doesn't sound right to me here. (cont.)