In slumber my imagination on wavy waters floated
Into deep strange seas it thus drifted,
The childhood photo of mine which on my walls hung
Sensing breath from its frame flung!
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A greatly expressed reminiscence of your childhood years, with its innocence and avidity for life. A poem, most of us can relate to; going through life, and comparing the present moment with our memories of past. Beautifully composed.
This is an amazing poem composed in the light of childhood recalled through nostalgia. Thanks. The childhood photo of mine which on my walls hung Sensing breath from its frame flung!
The dirt of the shore mixed with crystal waters of childhood. Nicely conceptualized poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Innocence of childhood and reality of adulthood beautifully contrasted (10)