Thursday, March 14, 2019

On Bluetooth - A Unique Love Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

He was searching himself
All day and all nights
None to love nor stay besides
A blind walk, all over the places
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M. Asim Nehal
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Gordon Walter 14 March 2019

Nice touching story, sometimes when you are dejected the God sent special angle to help you overcome your problems, though the man was talking to someone else the girl thought he was praising her. Liked the way you built it up as a poem.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 March 2019

The rainbow of Bluetooth love is well reflected with realized uniqueness and love is magnified. A brilliant poem is excellently penned....10

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Rajnish Manga 14 March 2019

The travesty of life may come before us in different shapes and forms. The narrative unfolds a world of countless possibilities and interpretations. Some painful, some pleasant. Thanks a lot, Asim ji.

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M. Asim Nehal

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