Saturday, June 2, 2007

On Being Human Comments

Rating: 5.0

An educated man came by
and talked about humility.
And over tea and humblepie
I answered with hostility.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Chris McInnes 03 June 2007

The A-B rhyme pattern sure grows on the reader. Not in a good way for me but that is up to opinion. Gets predictable after the 3rd stanza; combined with the pretentious nature of the piece... *shutters* If I were to tell you anything about what I think I would say crap the pattern and inser some imagery that goes beyond black and white.

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