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Lovely poem Capture this heart into your soul And then try to console

A melancholy poem, rare from Rini. But touching.

Then you won't be able to scrap the crust Lost it's key, never it will laugh The mind will talk on it's behalf. Rini, i hope that the key is found and the laughter returns. :)

Lost it's key, never it will laugh The mind will talk on it's behalf.......so true. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

slightly sadish poetry speaks against the smiles you give lady have you forgotten the lane to my poetric domain

I hated this awful poem(actually it's an amazing poem but I wanted to write something different this time) !

Great poem about the heart.

Rini, an imaginative poem. Every heart needs to be captured to thrive and stay alive.+++10