On Behalf Of Barbies Comments

well-constructed, with enough repetition to get your message across well. (but) maybe if you didn't hide some of your feelings, you wouldn't get hurt, or at least not in the same ways. you might mix with a crowd (or individuals) who are more like you and with whom you can be yourself, not always on guard to pretend, and be less likely to be hurt. maybe the most important flaw is pretending to be what you aren't. there must be some qualities you have that are not flaws and which you might work to your advantage. and) maybe those who hurt you are pretending some also. maybe they are barbies or kens? [of course maybe you made up everything in the poem, and it is really not about you.] thanks for sharing. bri :)

Hello good friend Kazi. You have penned a very sad poem. I could sense the pain in the words. I enjoyed. I have a new poem titled, I'll Put Some Coffee On you might enjoy. Loyd