Wednesday, January 6, 2010

***on Becoming Blind*** Comments

Rating: 2.7

Life is now as confusing
as an Irish mermaid.
The dye from these thick, black socks
colours my toes in violet.
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Ian Bowen
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 November 2010

This is what a blind feels. You have brought it out in a very realistic way. Kudos to your efforts. Nice write.

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Fay Slimm 06 January 2010

A truly poetic image of the condition of blindness which no one but the victim could know - - Ian you have described a real challenge..... best of wishes and thank you for sharing this enlightening verse. 10 Fay.

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