***********on August 21,2008 Comments

a thrilling account...the desire takes a breath-taking avatar in the last stanza... and this one just stands out 'Come on bier If you wish to deny delivery of any Happiness to the living me' cheers

excellent piece. The last stanza is extraordinary....my 10

Very good.I enjoyed it.

hey! ! no no not at all! ! ! ! all is well...just a little hectic for last couple of weeks....very graphic and pressing on the senses due to boldness of verse.kudos!

i appreciate you being so blunt in picturing your thoughts

what connotation...it reads a familiar metaphor...