Mantu Mahakul

Mantu Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
Friday, January 6, 2017

On Arrival This Goodbye Is Comments

Rating: 5.0

While dawn is on arrival, half moon goes far,
Feeling shyness of facing light, moon thinks,
Trees giving fresh air try to cover in leaves,
Branches bow down and stems up-rise soon.
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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 March 2020

Adding the 10 Full Score for this amazing poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 March 2020

Glorifing his name, this beauty sings ever. You see and feel. On arrival this goodbye is. Like we take birth and and we face death, But this process is not an end. This starts. God is great, God is merciful. We are lucky. SUCH BRILLIANTLY WORDED, BEST CAPTURED EVER, GOD IS GREAT AND MERCIFUL. WE ARE LUCKY EXCELLENT POEM, DEAR MANTU. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING. I read this with greatest pleasure

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Mantu Mahakul

Mantu Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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