Sunday, February 5, 2023

On Another Sky ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

And there is a another sky,
which shines by the pearls;
days seldom fades by the darkness
silence flows on wings -
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M. Asim Nehal
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"Life is beyond death" great revelation. Nice poem. Top score

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Juhaina Tumlu 05 February 2023

Very true but where is such place?

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Richard Wlodarski 05 February 2023

Beyond inspirational! And your last line surpasses priceless, my friend!

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Zoyza Da Vinka 05 February 2023

Excellent poem.: I quote 'come let us dwell there, where life is beyond death.'

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 February 2023

Simply beautiful Asim

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Sandra Feldman 05 February 2023

This marvelous poem renews hope and life, makes us feel good, when all around us is lacking luster and life. Thank you, dear poet and friend.

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M. Asim Nehal

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