Wednesday, April 23, 2014

On And On And On Comments

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Arch your back for a familiar God.
Mechanised reasoning
Conditioned thinking
Expected speeches
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Anand Brown
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Achill Lad 07 October 2014

I think this poem is written by a man with a strong social conscience. Another meaningful message Anand. Read my poem the Price of Gold.

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a social commitment shown by the poet regarding his sympathy to the poor I think.Nice poem.

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Paul Sebastian 30 April 2014

The plight of the poor, labouring day in day out, is well captured in your poem. I liked the last part: Worker there is no reward for your Devotion. Just a simple Thank you, For giving us your Soul. Great write! Paul

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