Tuesday, September 3, 2013

On An Autumn Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Around her green rows of trees
Breezy breaths and buzzing bees
Her crystal face mirrors serenity
A strip of pond far from city!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Tribhawan Kaul 04 September 2013

Beautifully penned.From autumn clouds sky pours its mirth On this small village a mound of earth Here men of soil hands smudged with clay Merrily live in huts of hay! ...Lovely imagery.

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Lorraine Colon 04 September 2013

A wonderful way to spend an Autumn day - away from the bustling city, and with good, sincere people. Lovely poem.

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Valsa George 03 September 2013

What they speak is unrehearsed Flow from heart no grudge nursed They don’t mince words haven’t the skill Speak only that they truly feel! A lovely image of rustic innocence and a lovely poem!

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