Sunday, July 1, 2012

On A Trip To End A Relationship Comments

Rating: 4.5

Set fourth in the vast ocean
Bound for the endlesss horizon
There I sat
Imagining myself to be
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 16 July 2012

Like the titanic Guilt sank me To the bottomless sea. you have let your thought to fly high to look into the bottomless sea! Nice!

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Rajat Joshi 15 July 2012

the poem is beautiful. but i believe in a long distance relationship and that at the end no matter what the two will always meet. just like how it happens in movies..: -)

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