Sunday, January 27, 2008

On A Spring.............. Comments

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It felt like a dream
Colours everywhere
The beautiful scent
Never went unnoticed
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Reshma Dream Is Never A Crime................
spring Buildings Plants
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Pradeep Dhavakumar 27 January 2008

Good poem Reshma.Repeating lines work well with Structured poems. Try to structure this one and avoid repeating words. And Since 'Yes, it was spring' repeats well, try to use it in the last stanza as well. Regards, Pradeep.D

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Reshma Dream Is Never A Crime................

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Reshma Dream Is Never A Crime................
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