Thursday, November 17, 2005
On A Soldier Fallen In The Philippines Comments
Rating: ★4.5
Streets of the roaring town,
Hush for him, hus, be still!
He comes, who was stricken down
Doing the word of our will.
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Declan McHenry
17 November 2005
Ramon, I liked this. A couple of minor spelling errors but: Strong images. Strong message. Strong structure. The last two lines are a killer.
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7/27/2025 10:15:06 AM # 1.0.0
Um excuse me, but I believe that was written way before your time. Please at least quote your source, cause I've seen this poem before, and it was definitely not you