Tiny droplets of water on the window pane
a unique making, silent steps of glory
a billion feathers that hath hatched
one little room, the intellect decided on a holiday
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Your thoughts are good, imagery great, but I have a hard time reading it, because
sentences run together and don't make sense that way. Maybe try reading books
in English, and noticing the punctuation, especially ending sentences before going
onto the next one. Look forward to reading more of your poetry. RoseAnn
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Your thoughts are good, imagery great, but I have a hard time reading it, because sentences run together and don't make sense that way. Maybe try reading books in English, and noticing the punctuation, especially ending sentences before going onto the next one. Look forward to reading more of your poetry. RoseAnn
Here I am talking about a snowman build by children.!