Thursday, October 20, 2011

On A Rainy Day Comments

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Under the rain i shared my warm tears with the cold emptiness of the bench
The sky sang its songs and lit the darkness of the street
The busy road roared with every car that passed by
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Allan Macli Borges 20 October 2011

a rainy day is always a special one, it makes me feel the little things around - always followed by a bit of sadness... good poem.

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Unwritten Soul 20 October 2011

Your riding the clouds and share the tears like it's raining tears from your eyes too...maybe it's what the gray clouds feel..It such emotional day but it still makes the day feel so inspiring for a beautiful write, and you make this.._Unwritten Soul

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Hans Vr 20 October 2011

Wow, fantastic verses, expressing a strong feeling. I particularly like the contrast of the warm tears and the cold emptiness. Very well written, dear poet.

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