Thursday, October 20, 2005

On A Mossy Rock Comments

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A mossy rock was waiting
I sat and watched the waterfall
and tiny bubbles springing free
as if to reach the sun's warm rays.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 20 October 2005

Nice....couldn't help but smile at the end of it. The last lines were the best.

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Raynette Eitel 20 October 2005

Ah, the wisdom that comes from aging! :) Your last lines were just wonderful and I suspect very true! Nice poem, Herbert. Raynette

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Ulrike Gerbig 20 October 2005

this made me smile. a nice answer to questions we all ask ourselves! u.

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