On A Mission Comments

Well conceived and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful poem written with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing, madam. Remain enriched.

Every morning we see new brand day and we feel glad. Food is fed to hungry and every poor is taken care up with love. Earth bestows good things to us in love. Teaching the love of Jesus is a great perspective and learning values motivate mind. This poem is excellently penned.10

In a mission with a vision. Nice work.

the angel wings you had gotten, so very long ago when GOD blessed you with the dreams we all know

the angel wings you had gotten, so very long ago when GOD blessed you with the dreams we all know

the angel wings you had gotten so very long ago, when GOD blessed you with the words that we now know.

This is a beautiful poem, just reading it once soothes one's heart! Deserves 10/10. 'Bestow my earthly goods To those who are in need Giving of some precious time Then sow some nurturing seed' I liked this stanza the most. I've also read your biography, the three philosophies of life that you have mentioned are indeed very much inspiring.

I can see a pious soul through these lovely lines........... excellent.

It's a Great and Inspiring poem. You are my inspiration to write for a good cause...hats off to you: -)

Glory to be the LORD...each line and stanza wreath in a string to beautify it...A Garland of Humanity...I thank also for the comment as a poet A bit late I was Sick with this sicky world 10

Yes Ma'am! Thats how we earn the angel wings! To accomplish the tasks given by God and to work with him! I guess it is more of a spiritual write!

We all need faith at some point in our lives. A great poem.

A beautiful poem....this has a heavenly feel. Love it.

your angel wings were there from the very start, it was just hidden deep inside your heart

You've earned your angel wings with this lovely poem. Great work.

I love to see brightness through your mind, and it shine well in heart...so no wonder your write is very pretty art! _Soul

beautiful just beautiful i am in awe the words and the feelings in them is just beautiful....

this is very altruistically written.i see real LOve in this poem.not the love itself.love for everyone. superb and marvelous.

I really love this one, so well said.

excellent writing. very positive. enjoyable read