Tuesday, January 13, 2009

On A Lonely Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

During nights as lonely as this
I walk down my Balcony
Looking for happiness
Where there is none
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Every mans bane summarized so succinctly Not that am sad - That I am not Just not happy

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Kesav Easwaran 15 January 2009

a day break spotted in the darkness of night...the day and the night will soon merge in...good write, Ash...reflective sadly romantic...10

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Keith Hendrickson 13 January 2009

i like the concept. very nice piece.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 January 2009

The light will come to you soon Ash, enlightening your world of loneliness.Sometimes you don't need miracles to happen.Good job Ash.

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