Thursday, April 18, 2019

On A Lonely Beach Comments

Rating: ★3.9

Oh tide of fate!
Do not play with a broken heart,
you wet the sand and I saw a pen of fingers drawing it,
on a lonely beach!
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Akhtar Jawad
beach lonely
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Aniruddha Pathak 10 May 2019

A lovely poem indeed, and the notes add to its loveliness.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 April 2019

she came just in time to shower the flower laalalolalalaa

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 April 2019

What a wonderful poem, Sir Akhtar. So beautifully crafted and well executed. Loved the Poet's Notes. Very inspiring.10+++and onto my Poem Listt

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Khalid Saifullah 20 April 2019

A nice romantic poem................

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Kostas Lagos 18 April 2019

A very beautiful poem Akhtar!

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