Saturday, August 3, 2013

On A Lifeless World Comments

Rating: 5.0

From his glassed verandah
he stared in wonder at the motionless sky
with not a star twinkling,
he felt sadly amused,
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Valsa George 06 August 2013

Beautiful poem! Lost in a terrain where time stood timelessly frozen, where the silvery disc has faded into a pale orb and you looking at the frigid sky unable to weave any web of dreams! Great imagery! ! Enjoyed much! !

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Neela Nath Das 03 August 2013

Beautiful verse! A 10 of course.

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Lucifera Santez 03 August 2013

wonderful. like it a lot. :)

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