Thursday, March 5, 2009

On A Forlorn Day Comments

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On a forlorn day of purely grey,
There wandered a vagrant on his way
To a location to keep warm,
For the sky beheld a violent storm.
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Travis Lepine
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Angelic Warrior 10 November 2009

whoa... that is a brilliant story really hard to take your eyes off.....long...but i wanted to read it all the way...i wanted to know more really captures your attention love the vocabulary, love the story line the rhythm and rhyme are fantastic i've got to say..you are one of the best poets i've seen in a very long time... thank you very much that was wonderful! 10+++

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