On A Far Away Beach At Dawn Comments

You have placed a glorious picture in my mind. It is all wonderful and as your lines our outstretched it stretches the images even more. The work of an excellent poet. Top marks! Karin Anderson

As I read the lines my imagination started to drum up and I could see right away the images especially the early dawn in a beach, the saffron skies, cold wind, kids digging, the low tide, blah, blah, blah. Yeah, it's great, I nearly pick up my brush and canvas if you know what I mean. Excellent creation is my verdict at this moment.

Eddie I enjoyed this poem, for a second I could see that far away beach, wonderful imagery, depth of feeling, a very lovely poem.A 10

Nice, descriptive, and I can feel the grit in the wind. well done. T

A far away beach seems very near while reading this poem, but you are already missing your easy chair, your garden and the most of all her smile..... Regards Naseer

you took me with you edddie..........well penned

amazing imagery sir.....admirable work....110