Friday, November 14, 2014

On A Couch Of Thoughts Comments

Rating: 4.8

A languid dusk of pensiveness
Twilight of frisky departure
On a lazy couch of dreaminess
Lie as to sink in emptiness
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SALINI NAIR
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Edward Kofi Louis 18 November 2014

Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Ramesh Rai 16 November 2014

Each stanza of this poem is effulgent. Thanks for sharing

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Valsa George 14 November 2014

A languid mood prevails through out the poem, though there is breeze in the twilight and stats in the night sky! A poem with many great lines!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 November 2014

Nice soulful moments of evening captured in a wonderful way......very well composed......amazing write

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 14 November 2014

Write that fills in an open heart......In fact it seems that the poet written the poem in an open heart emotion and likes it very much.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 November 2014

A lazy breeze passed with chillness Takes to the frozen past of life Soothes the empty part of life Takes to the wings of tenderness A beautiful description.

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