Sunday, July 21, 2019

On A Cooled Down Earth Comments

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Today, earth has lost the natural check on growing population
water has become scarce for the flush and for vegetation.
It's growing geometrically,
while resources are growing arithmetically.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 July 2019

A powerful and commendable write. Imaginative yet true. Perceptive and wonderful. Another very meaningful message to humanity. You have many great poems, but, I think this is one of your best. Onto my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 July 2019

Cont.. Though the great Poet has woven from imagination, if we dig into what is happening today, there is truth on the matter, as what Sir Aniruddha has commented below, to which I absolutely concur.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 July 2019

What a MAGNIFICENT write! The great Poet once again showed his prowess through his vast imagination, knowledge and philosophical thinkings.. Very meaningful write that touches the heart of humanity.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 July 2019

great imaginative yeah; love impossible in cooled down earth!

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 July 2019

it has already activated the giant heavenly missiles, Yes I agree, nature has. And we shall get what we deserve. Fatalistic, but so true. The poem raises very relevant points, even now tho late it is not too late.

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