Monday, February 24, 2014

On A Cool February Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a cool February morning
The buds playing pick a boo.
The thrush in the Fairy Castle,
Smiled and said 'how do you do'?
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Juan Olivarez
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Valsa George 01 March 2014

With winter giving way to spring, birds and bees and butterflies are back to their usual haunts! Nature teems with animals and birds and the air vibrant with their happy sounds! I like to see titmouse in the checkered vest and the finch in yellow blouse! Lovely description of Nature!

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Smoky Hoss 26 February 2014

Ah yes, and may it truly be so. Beautiful poem.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 26 February 2014

You capture Juan the hues of Nature in riveting detail!

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Valerie Dohren 24 February 2014

Well, nearly Winter's end Juan, we've still got March to get through, or maybe its different in Texas! Seriously though, a very fine poem, some great descriptions, and a delightful read.

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