Thursday, December 19, 2013

On A Computer Screen Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some time when you sit and contemplate
Think of your life as a Word document
Displaying on a computer screen
Your past deeds are words that have been deleted
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Savita Tyagi
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 November 2017

Time is still there to correct your mistakes Add some good vocabulary To polish your dull writings -An excellent piece of work with a precious message..Liked it..10++++

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Savita Tyagi 17 November 2017

Thank you so much Dr. Dillip for reading my poems and your generous comments. Appreciate it very much. Welcome to PH.com. It is a great site to read and share poetry. It would be a pleasure to read your poems.

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Bri Edwards 17 December 2015

Think of your life as a Word document Displaying on a computer screen .................as i kept reading, i had to remind myself you were speaking of people's lives, and giving us advice. of course i NEED NO ADVICE! i can and do sometimes mess my life up without any help from anybody. well, ok, i DO get some help! they are called wives. hee-hee. bri :) nice writing. and i've added more short poems to Section A in December's showcase. thanks for your feedback on the showcase. it is heartening to hear that SOMEONE reads and enjoys! ! ! any more poems from you this month?

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