Wednesday, January 13, 2016

On A Cold Night Comments

Rating: 4.4

Putrid, like burnt ice
Stale breath of winter night
Rose from the freezing ground
Spreading up to the trees' heights
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Nosheen Irfan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 June 2019

A vivid and touching expression has been made on cold weather and nature. I want to cite..... The sheet of stars over the velvet sky Dimmed and fogged by the sighing air Twinkling with half-hearted shine Hardly visible to the earthly eye Brilliant poem indeed.10

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Unnikrishnan E S 27 September 2016

Hi Nosheen, This poem I had read long back and revisited now. I have seen people living in the streets of Delhi suffer the cold during winter. A true picture you have drawn here. Communicated to my heart directly. Congrats.10.

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You have painted a picture of rich quality my friend!

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 January 2016

'The rising fumes of cold, Knitted in the white tresses, Of snow-decked trees' is simply beautiful. Vivid description of a cold night of winter. Keep inking.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 January 2016

Missing love. Nice work.

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