Thursday, December 6, 2012

On A Breakup Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day you left, as I recall
You stood so high, you stood so tall
No wonder you couldn't hear me say
So high you were, so low I lay
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kanav justa
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Neetha Sasidharan 17 January 2013

full of emotion......go on....we, poemhunters r waiting for more poems frm u

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Zeenat Fatima 29 December 2012

heart touchng poem..

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Tiffany Baldwin 17 December 2012

Your poetry pulls me in. I would like to read more,

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So Close 13 December 2012

wow...its really amazing....with painful words you opened your heart..the last line was so amazing i liked it very much... »so close«

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Ken E Hall 13 December 2012

Sad and honest with some tongue in cheek love, a good breakup poem with fun...regards

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Hazel Durham 09 December 2012

Such honesty creating a bleak picture of a broken soul with a touch of comedy, amazing, outstanding write! !

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Neela Nath Das 08 December 2012

Painful is the feeling, but great as it pushed you to poetry. Loved it.

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Jahan Zeb 06 December 2012

I enjoyed it. Just like pain described in a comic way. This is a nice way of telling or complaining and at the same time making it comic. I love it really. And some of them which couldn't change Have left my skull and I look so strange Very nice

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