The day you left, as I recall
You stood so high, you stood so tall
No wonder you couldn't hear me say
So high you were, so low I lay
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wow...its really amazing....with painful words you opened your heart..the last line was so amazing i liked it very much... »so close«
Sad and honest with some tongue in cheek love, a good breakup poem with fun...regards
Such honesty creating a bleak picture of a broken soul with a touch of comedy, amazing, outstanding write! !
Painful is the feeling, but great as it pushed you to poetry. Loved it.
I enjoyed it. Just like pain described in a comic way. This is a nice way of telling or complaining and at the same time making it comic. I love it really. And some of them which couldn't change Have left my skull and I look so strange Very nice
full of emotion......go on....we, poemhunters r waiting for more poems frm u