Saturday, July 30, 2011

Omnipresent Hope Comments

Rating: 4.7

Wide and strange are its way,
Nor have boundary to survey,
Nor can weigh its quantity,
Occupy everywhere like an Omnipresent
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VIPINS PUTHOORAN
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 May 2016

hope pours incommensurable ecstacy in the heart like the drops of water in the rain, the grits of sand in the shore, the mass of stars in the sky, this is a beautiful poem on hope. i am simply excited by this...... the use of words and expressions are simply wonderful..... a fine poem of hope indeed. tony

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Harindhar Reddy 01 November 2011

'To drink its azymous hive, To wings up our dreams to fly in azure. Clench him, with our cicatric hand.' Wo! Wo! Wo! Where have you mastered this language of mind and heart! You can win anyone with these immaculate wordings and phrases. The language employed here walked straight in my heart leaving me sensitive like mimosa. Succinct and distinct are contrasting words yet both suits your diction when I read this poem. May this instill hope in tens of people. Great work, Proud of you, Carry on and on...............

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Kevin Patrick 26 October 2011

Mesmerizing, you captivate me with the spirit of God and the belief in transcendence should be used in some schools.

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Dave Walker 20 October 2011

Wow. Very very good. Great poem.

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Sonali Sings 18 October 2011

Amazing imagination... magnificent use of words. well written.

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Allemagne Roßmann 31 July 2011

Good presence of mind and well written.

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