~ Omni Pervading Mother ~ Comments

Very beautifully written piece.

I know your poetic voice is innovative dear Niv! It's ammmmmazing!

I especially loved the first stanza flowing into these stanzas. Beautiful symmetry in simplicity. Colour in thoughts with such swift transverses I have not done for a long time.10+++ O Your Blue-ocean-aqua-sodden Feet. O Your Breeze-quivered-green Anchala. O Your Himalayan-high-head Kissing the sky Like Hoar frosted crown.

[Humble submission: This poem with humility consecrated to Sr. Poet Mom Almeda Knight on her 75th birth day 26th April.....noble soul u r referring to.... nice n humble submission.....10 as i enter.......humble submission

To All Readers Thanks all for appreciation of this poem Omni Pervading Mother. I can say just I’m just a silhouette of shadow of RNT…Magic lies in RNT Humbly your niv 20.05.10.

Givers of / Sacred Nectarine Humor Holy Milk / O Motherhood Troupe You’re / We worship You. You are simply genius. Improvisation of a certain motherly feeling such a broadscape of natural phenomena could be only possible to a human heart who has experienced life through an infinite light of universe. This much I can put to your page after reading it the second times. Morning glory touch your poetic face to bloom another writing to glorify the humanity. Thank you poet niv. 10++++ Apoet

Splendid tribute to a great mother! Beautiful and well crafted verses!

She was smiling but her kind voice was stern. I felt relieved, that she was calm wet the sand if comes a storm and while upon a dune I stand, because across the open plains the wind loves her, Anchala...........iip

Mother Earth [ME] and Mother [M] well blended… What M imbibes is but from ME… tolerance, love, beauty [smile of M], soothe [shadow under tree in scorching sun], solace [ambiance] and so on Poet has well addressed in this poem…and fills heart with joy and warmth and put us in the lullaby nostalgia… For Great Mother 10+ Dr. V

I love your way to write. I love it i feel your sense and touch my heart and soul.

Well-written...great tribute indeed

Hi Niv, its a nice poem, a special tribute to some one who really deserves it. thanks a lot for sharing it.

a heart-warming, soul-touching tribute to a wonderful human being...filled with true emotion and sincerity

A great Poem and true tribute to a Sr. Poet… Here we find blend of ancient wisdom and the then attitudes and adoration towards Mother … Like hymns…it flows and flows …touching the inner vibes of readers … May commentators have ably …I think needn’t elaborate it… Finally I say with the poet 'O Motherhood Troupe You’re/We worship You.’ Thanks for sharing 10++

Soul soothing in the backdropp of Vedic vibes… How Mother is glorified in India it is a perfect reflection… Very well penned [adaptation] It can be said exploration of excellence of inner world reached to acme in Vedic thoughts… RNT manly influenced [better word imbibed] by this ancient wisdom of Upanishad [‘the Vedanta philosophy developed from the pantheistic views of the Upanishads’] … Highest tribute to Mother I’ve ever read Thanks Poet Ms. Nivedita for your yeoman’s efforts… 10++ to all Mothers

lovely, impressive and fantastic tribute to mom..really enjoyed t..and let me say..your mom is great is all the mothers are...well done

I totally concurr with all your sentiments - however in my case I see ALMEDIA as a lovely Sister. Like you i admire her as a talented and generous poet. Thnaks for you tribute - Love you in Poetry - JOHN.

Great… Great… Great… Homage and worshipping Mother Magnificent splendorous Every stanza is bubbling with fervor of adoration… MOM is great indeed but 12 10+++

Words have a way about them.

A great tribute to a great mother. Mythology is used beautifully here. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me