Tuesday, September 2, 2008

(omen) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is at unpredictable stance
Something happen by chance
Now you are merry the next sad
Or feel gloomy and then turn glad
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Ershad Mazumder 14 September 2008

Do you believe in omen? I do not. Everything is perception. Your composition is very good

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Tarun Sharma 14 September 2008

a strong sketch of life! nice rgds

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Onelia Avelar 03 September 2008

Good rhyme and rhythm and a solid, profound, simple, human message. Just very well done and pleasant reading, Marvin. Best regards, onelia a

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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