Friday, December 14, 2012

Olives And Doves* … 1412-12 Comments

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We hold in our palms
Many solutions to a quest
Also in our hearts
so close to our heaving breast
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Yasmin Khan 13 January 2013

May God we find our doves and olives! A lovely read.

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Mandi June 06 January 2013

A beautiful, peaceful journey! A wonderful poem, my friend :)

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Soulful Heart 03 January 2013

olives and doves the symbol of peace.......................surmounting the fates decree........wow

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 19 December 2012

Aweinspiring poem and d title esp attractd me as a muslim both olive n dove r special n dear. I saw thousands of doves in masjidul haram in mecca. And many here too in Daresalam where i live. None in pakstan? Have been there too. And u say, 'sword in hand ready to slash promisin trees.', impressive! And i also admire d 'nonchalant...crest line. God bless.

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Zine Hadjira 16 December 2012

Great poem both olives and doves are nice to see

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Unwritten Soul 15 December 2012

The rhymes always in your hand, and again see you doing awesome in a vacation...this is great for you, and above all i love the meaning and lines...a fantastic work...no need to thanks, what you deserve just accept it..okay_Soul

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Sadiqullah Khan 14 December 2012

Nice Saadat, great message and well written.

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