Olive Branches Comments
Two children
made an awning
from the branches
of an olive tree.
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Thank you dear Rose for sparing your time to read my humble poem, , really your generous commentary encouraging me to write better, kind regards keep writing and stay blessed
A vivid depiction of the wrath of nature and violence of men. Both create destruction but fate can change the face of harshness to peace A beautifully crafted write so well executed. Superb imagery. To my Poem List and 10+++
Excellent write! It takes great imagination and brilliant mind to weave this marvelous and meaningful poem. Out of destruction and darkness sometimes an avenue is created to give peace and calmness.
the beauty is in the eye of the beholder... your poetic eyes and widen mind can see perfectly what is good and what is not, I am proud of your amazing poetic power you are carrying with yourself all the time, I wish you every success and many thanks for your lovely comment..
Beautiful thoughts from a good natured mind. Nice welcome piece Soran 10
There is such a grave beauty in this poem about violence- that takes a lot of talent to achieve. 10+++
Thank you Susan, really always we get a wonderful surprise comment from you, that is what the professional and poetry expert do... Regards
Beautiful poem of the gift of perfect peace and hope. I see the tears of Gaia subliminally in the last verse, making amends to humankind's folly, arrogance and foolish vanity. Another superb poem with an imagery for each reader to explore and conclude in their minds. 10++ and added to my little piece of calm for a rainy day treasure chest. I thank you again Soran and take care my friend.
Dear soul mate and amazing poet Shaun...kind to hear from a professional poet this unique comment...Best Regards
kind to hear from a professional poet this unique comment...Regards
Olive branches of peace and love! ! ! 🕊 The world needs peace than war! ! ! ! ! ! 🌿 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
you are the one who reads the poems very deeply and understanding the hidden sides of it, Many Thanks Afgarsto
Many Thanks dear poet, appreciating your feeling and score...regards
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7/27/2025 9:40:43 AM # 1.0.0
From what source the destruction came, from the same source peace also has emanated. The children who had to suffer the pangs of destruction turned out to be boons by being the agents of nourishment.....! They didn't keep any resentment against those who destroyed their calm, instead they turned out to be blessings....! Beautiful way of presenting! Great poem Soran!