Thursday, September 11, 2008

Olive Branch - In Top 500 Comments

Rating: 4.9

Hii’s, Hellos, Heys, sweet serenades,
Burn them, the cinerary will show
They have no meaning.
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ANJALI SINHA
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Ouida Williams-Gee 17 March 2017

I love this website, I am going to share it with relatives and friends! ! !

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Tender tone that trumpets the therapeutic truth of peace and love. Wonderfully worded my friend!

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Saadat Tahir 12 June 2009

thought i ll dig deeper today an do an old one of yours All this, while u lead me by my nose, You’re a hard nut to crack, sundar...shairi great poetry cheers an ten

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another amasing write..lovely flow of words..it's again a fig soaked in honey

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Ken E Hall 27 March 2009

your olive branch so luvli to read +++10.... for me the last line the best, excuse the Yorkshire luv regards uavanice1

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Mark R Slaughter 01 March 2009

Anjali you are without doubt a highly accomplished poet. I like that breadth of vocabulary you use to enhance your messages. Great write. I hope you keep posting new poems. Mark

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Ridge Cahill 08 December 2008

Wow! Utterly magical. Wrought with such truth, beautiful angst and sincerity.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 13 November 2008

gorgeous! very nice! keep writing! could you read and comment on my poems too, specially the new ones? Thank you.

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Raunak Sharma 17 October 2008

Love ur life coz life is a long journey to go. Life is a game yet to be played more. Life is a question yet to be answered more. Life is a challenge yet to be faced more. So live ur life as long as u can. Every moment is lovable in life.

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Shalabh Gupta 28 September 2008

great imagination n choice of words.....kudos 2 u

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 September 2008

very attentive/hearty composition. full of love and threw challange too whereas lovedone deserve share............ 'Hii’s, Hellos, Heys, sweet serenades, Burn them, the cinerary will show They have no meaning. ' -Yie hai preetpurna krodh, jiski andar preet hi preet! 'Don’t vapulate me with your intimidations, The hiatus will only increase. ' -Iisko ham kehte hai- If do anger to little burn that's nothing, heart's concern. Agnipariksha? Bishuddh ho ney key liey wo bhi prayojan hai. Is kabita jab tom likh rahe theey tab tom chandralokit shuddh prempurna thei. and the poem is a greaaaat expression! ! +++++++10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 September 2008

Hey dear, your my fragrance too.I don't have to climb the steep hills of paradise cuz you're my paradise.I' ll love you forever Anjali Sinha.You're my everything in this universe! ! !

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Kee Thampi 25 September 2008

real flow of dreamy words here You forget, you my fragrance. That elysian happiness will inebriate. Come what may, Inhale, and anaesthetise, Dreaming of you Day and night.

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Issam Hal 24 September 2008

u know this poem is so so beautiful and ur mind is more beautiful. tnx so much but hey i like ur style but pls and pls and pls i ask u if u can use more simple words. just to dont make me live in torment when im reading ur poems.

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Gargi Saha 24 September 2008

A lovely poem.............10++++ Thanks for your nice comments on my poem U R Precious.

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I give you 8 for this poem..but I believe that if you work in a less sophisticated way, with more simple words (poetry belongs to everybody) and with the same imagination and passion, soon will reach the level of a full 10. Also avoid capitals in your verses. The poem itself has its own strong voice. (See some of my poems) Joseph S. Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) ILP awarded

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Blue Eyes 20 September 2008

what a sublime language u used! it really took my mind far beyond my imagination

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premji premji 18 September 2008

now the olive leaves brought by my pigeons are sent by Satan... the days of peace in my nation are over and to survive even i have to arm my soul... REAL AGNIPAREEKSHA

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Wali Jamali 17 September 2008

Anjali, Divinity is your fortress. you are just superb. I feel no inferiority by putting it blatantly that i need to follow you. you have sweet things to sayforth. you have powerful medium of expression. words, imagination, composition, style, energy, soul, and what not...........Love for you.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 September 2008

Wow Anjali! What a poem! Those rare, apt, beautiful words! Those aesthetic descriptions! GREAT POEM! ! ! ! ! I have no words to describe! ! ! ! ! ! Let me borrow some from you! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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