Friday, July 21, 2017

Olive Comments

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Let's grub up weapon plants
to grow olive grove
as habitat of human doves
in our mine infested mind
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Mj Lemon 31 March 2020

Perhaps every world leader ought to plant one olive tree each year. A great verse, Yoonoos.

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Anjandev Roy 16 July 2019

Peace and war together cannot grow.........wonderful write. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Benjamin Uy 07 March 2019

Dazzling, fantastic, imaging poem, concerning the boundaries and conflicts about love.

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Prabir Gayen 15 February 2019

peace and war together cannot grow. war must be uprooted if peace blossoms.. no hands must paw over it.....yes two can not cohabit

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Captain Cur 04 September 2018

Beautiful stanzas highlighting the need for peace to save us from ourselves. Perhaps the fatalistic tendencies of humanity does not give pause in his/her path to destruction. Although we all must die, is it not nobler to strive to leave something better behind. A peaceful olive grove is what we all need, to sit in, share and reflect.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 June 2018

Let's grub up weapon plants to grow olive grove The dove of peace needs a branch of olve, not the weapons, listen to her sweet mlodies of peace, humans be humans.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2018

peace and war together cannot grow. war must be uprooted if peace blossoms.. no hands must paw over it...... yes, peace and war can't grow together. War should be uprooted soon to be established peace. A beautiful poem shared with nice theme. Thanks for sharing.

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Tom Allport 25 May 2018

a wonderful right? peace will help us grow out of a world full of sorrow! ...……….writtened well Yoonoos

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Mihaela Pirjol 23 May 2018

Great imagery, with the olive as symbol for peace.

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engeli 19 November 2017

this is ever true. lovely piece talking about peace. Because of ignorance, our very nature suffers

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Alexander Egbe Onoja 04 November 2017

let's wage war on poverty, not poor people.... wage war against death, not life.... Thanks for sharing.

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Prasanta Kumar Mahapatra 09 August 2017

A great call to wage war against death for life which can bring eternal peace.

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Akram Saqib 06 August 2017

nice piece of verse is you peace peer bocus

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Marguerite C. Anderson 04 August 2017

Powerful imagery of the horror created by man as he senselessly destroys nature and all that was created for his and for our well-being.

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Nafis Shadhin 04 August 2017

nice and beautiful about peace.

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Linda Hepner 04 August 2017

Why is it we all wish for peace, which you long for in your poem, yet cannot achieve it? What would the world be like run by poets? I have no answers. Only history will tell and then it will be too late.

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Hassan Hayati 02 August 2017

Nice to use your feelings in the sake of peace. peace in all world is my pray

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Adegoroye Kenny James 02 August 2017

Great one yoonoos. Peace is all we need

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Adegoroye Kenny James 02 August 2017

Great one.. .peace is really what we need... let's wage war on death for lives, not men....

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Dr.subhendu Kar 31 July 2017

Ingenious write on earth of its changing habits and habitat as caused by its inhabitants which may lead to disastrous result and at this critical juncture we need to weave a web of oneness with love and peace for this humanity to stream long, quite humanistic write.++, thanks for sharing

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