Wednesday, June 14, 2023

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I'm laughing this morning, spontaneously. We're not studying any more. Our sophomore school year is over. I'm giddy, giggling, like a 9 year old on sugar.

I think I just finished the hardest class that I'll ever take - my last pure-math class, ever - and I got an "A." Just barely - by two-hundredths of a point (.02) . That's by the skin of a bacteria, the thickness of a sigh or the weight of a glance. Yeah, and I'll take it very much.
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Bri Edwards 20 June 2023

The 'ETC.' I used above FINALLY allowed me to fit my first comment into the comment space allowed. NOW I've no more time to finish reading your poem. bri : ( ha ha.

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Bri Edwards 20 June 2023

line 4: I think you, an aspiring physician(?) should use 'bacterium' Really! ! ! ha ha. bacterium: 'bacterium băk-tîr′ē-əm noun Any of various prokaryotic microorganisms of the domain Bacteria that... ETC.....' GOT IT NOW? ? ? : )

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